pfft fatty so cynical lol
I think its pretty awesome, sure some of the stuff sounds fairly familiar. But still its very well done. Unfortunate that it is so short tho. I dont feel sorrowed tears in it because it has a somewhat building suspense feel. But thats just me. Great work man!
Dude... awesome!
Got some serious talent up in the newgrounds. and nice work with your new irish whistle.
You've got a great voice.
And of course the pianos baller.
Keep it up man.. hot stuff!
Cool vocals
Very relaxing feel.
Could even apply to falling asleep at night instead of death :)
Everynight let your voice calm paranoid people into letting go of the knife under the pillow and fall asleep.
Cool beans!
I know very few of the paranoid people you speak of... but I sure hope this song could make them calm down a bit. JEEEZ.
Nice song, baww at quality
Quality is of course a downside, though the song itself is nice. Could be longer, but whatever. Get a good mic, you wont regret it :) (nor will we)
Other than that very nice work, Keep it up!
Nice!
Hey, this is a nice peice. The reason it hasn't done so well is probably due to the fact that the chords are a fairly common progression. But whatever I like the sound it has, Hope to hear the full version of this one as well.
The progression keeps reminding me of this other song i helped someone with lol
I understand, thanks....it isnt' all on here yet...but yeah it does have a very repetitive generic chord part...
Brent
Calm happy :D
Nice, I like the feel of it.
If i have anything to criticize is maybe more rhythemic vairation.. but thats just me :) keep it up.
Awesome...everythomg!!!
So im just profile surfing, and landed here after s/cymbol said you had awesome breaks.. and dude. I love your stuff. Specially this one so i commented here. Wish I knew how to amazing breaks like that. Just started out here tho... hope to learn, you our now one of my rolemodels.
Loved this song -downloading-
Just go ahead and send me a pm and I'll do my best to give you any advice that you can use. Thank you so much
What I saw...
I saw several things.. the most fitting of which is...
A young man leaves the love of his life to peruse his dream of his life and accomplish something amazing, but throughout his endeavors he can never forget about the girl he left and finally cant stand it anymore. He up and leaves his job to go find her but she too has left the town from whence they came. He goes from town to town, following any leads he can take, until one day he finally comes across someone who knows where she lives and she is still single and alone. The man, drives to her home the following day with flowers and his heart on his shoulder. She bursts into tears at the sight of him, and they embrace. They spend the next few weeks getting reacquainted with each other when the young man positive that he is in love drops to one knee one romantic evening and proposes to the woman. She is so happy that she starts crying before she barely manages to say "yes, oh god yes" in a barely audible yelp. A few months later they have an extravagant wedding and they are locked together to the cheers of family, friends, and the people the man met along the way who were moved by his story and journey. Time passes and they have several children and lead a wholesome happy life, their love never fading. Decades later they are old and worn out from life but still happy and still in love. One night they look at each other and whisper "I love you" and fall asleep in each others arms, an eternal sleep, never to awaken again.
It has to be on loop i guess :P
Loved it though Great stuff
Ah, a fine story. You could be a romantic writer, I'm sure women practically fall to your feet!
I thank you for the review, and I hope you will continue to listen and keep to the updates on my music!
Nice and fun, the orion needs some adjusting
It was pretty good and relaxing though I felt at a few times the plucking instrument you used seems a bit off with the vocals. Overall very nice and pleasant, though your friend orion needs to stfu. If people like it they like it, dont disrespect any of us just because you have it in your head that its the best thing since the dawn of man. He isnt the only one to work long and hard on his music, and people understand that if its got a lot of good work and effort behind it, it should show through. Dont tell us who we need to praise.
Orion meant for the people who go through and just vote Zero for the point of getting on the top five list.
And forgive him too, he's really, really... (Annoying) Hyper.
Why static WHy ;_;
It was a good song and i liked the feel of it, but when its left alone the static got to be kind of grahhh sorry. I did like it though, your stuffs great :) just less static please next time :) ooo actually it just hit the no static part... and the taking away the static made it sound better than ever so bad ass. But when the static comes back in... i die a little bit inside v_v 7.5/10
Static? What's that, never heard that before.
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Music Engineering
University of Miami
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